Status Updates From Deviant: A Dark Captive Rom...

I’m honestly on the verge of DNFing this one. Not because of the content - I mean, it comes with three pages of TWs so I knew it was going to be dark. And it is. But it’s littered with spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. The use of ‘breech’ instead of ‘breach.’ And even though it’s a book set in the UK written by a UK author, there’s too many Americanisms. Cars here have boots, not trunks.

“I needed him, I love him, and yet I despise everything about him all the same.”

“I’d rather have nothing than be like you.”

“She’s a firecracker and one I’m going to enjoy breaking.”

“I’m going to carve away every little piece of what makes you, you, I’ll destroy every tiny bit of hope you have, and only when I decide you’ve suffered enough, will I grant you your death.”

“Her sentence still stands.”

“Of course. I’m just going to take my time before I carry it out.”