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Fredegar Bolger
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The prose is bothersome because there's a lack of trust for the reader as the author has spelled literally everything out for the reader instead of letting subtext exist and babying us. The dialogue is unnatural and characters not very vivid. But I want to know the answer to the mystery, so I can't put it down.
— Mar 25, 2026 04:51AM
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