Status Updates From 2028: Tomorrow Is the Day

The concept of this book is very interesting, however the execution bad. On a craft level this book is very amateur, it’s hard to follow the scenes progression of events, there are tense changes in the same paragraph and, the point of view is very confusing. Is it 3rd person? And you can hear peoples thoughts so, are the descriptions then the persons thoughts or the omniscient narrators. It is very distracting.