Status Updates From Intrigued & Enchanted (Ench...

I can tell the author is not American due to the use of some British terms for things like flashlight (torch) and waistcoat (vest). Not a big issue but all the characters are supposed to be born and raised in the US. Maybe the main character's interest in English literature excuses it a bit, but that's a stretch.

catfight, well verbal catfight. the ex smack down. so knew this was going to happen

just read days instead of weeks. I think I need to see my eye doctor

I so knew this would happen

my bad they actually say what happened to the bad dude, thought I might be wrong and yep I was.

wait I just realized that there was never a mention of what happened to the killer or who he was until now.

I don't think you say someone you just met that you have some type of disease.

oh so just when only around 100 pages is left did the author remembers that lily needs money some how and this money needs to come from somewhere.

now she asks this? really now!!!?

wait she got a silver and blue double decker bus charm and then ticket to londen, but aren't the famous double decker busses of londen red

115 gages into the story and now we meet her family, or realize she has twin sisters. it's like at first the author did not want to include the family so she did not mention them at all but now she wants to use them so she suddenly dumps them in.

he is the first hero billionaire who is not a womanizer playboy in his spare time that I know of.

"I'll need to find a job that pays the bill just now." wow and how on earth were you paying these bills so far

shouldn't she be starting to look for a job? why neither her or her friend ever work but always have money and expensive things. now that the collage is over why aren't they looking for jobs or even think about looking for jobs.

cue in the drunk asshole. I can already tell what happens in the next few page.

I just realized that I have know Idea what her major is. I know what her thesis was about but I don't know what she is in collage.

i understand survives guilt but she does not raise any emotion in me but annoyance.

cue in the villainous ex. we sure going to see this one again

"the most peaceful sleep i've had since i was 15" 48 pages in and not once had she had a nightmare. not once she thought about the traumatic event that caused this nightmares that were only mentioned in passing. where are the emotional scars? she doesn't even think about it in her day to day life. to me she is comes off as emotionally healthy woman