Status Updates From The Buffalo Hunter Hunter

1) This is a fantastic line.
2) It feels slightly out of place with the setting, which mars the impact a little.

Interesting for now. Mildly confusing in places, but only because of the weird use of language by Good Stab (he's Indian, so, yeah, it explains a lot and adds to the authenticity), — like "napikwan" is a word for white man in crow language, but also "dirty-faces" is just another word for mice. Yeah.