Status Updates From Blood of Hercules Collector...

okay bought it bc it’s got beautiful sprayed edges but so far this is got major potential

The mythology is all wrong, ALL WRONG. Already I don’t like this main character, the introduction barely gives any characterization before she’s besties with some snake who is APPARENTLY Echidna, but also Nyx, neither of whom were invisible snakes. The grammar itself is also bad and the narrator herself I do not personally like, it’s the type of writing I would do in elementary school if I somehow wrote this.