Status Updates From If I Stopped Haunting You

I don't want to read this anymore, but I've come this far and I want to see how the mystery unravels, but the writing is not good.

I'm sorry, but Neil is not a moan-able name. Neeeiiiilllll. See? Eeyuuck 🤢

The romance between Neil and Penelope is kinda stilted and awkward. Like you hate him with a passion and the. All of a sudden you like//lust/love him. Where is the build up where is the crossing the fine line from enemies to lovers?