Status Updates From Crown of Steel and Embers

Im honestly not sure about this book, but Im determined to finish

I had to quit. The editing is awful. Perspectives switch 1st person to third person from paragraph to paragraph making it hard to keep up. “We soared through the trees” in one sentence becomes “they landed gracefully” in the next sentence even though it’s the same group of riders. Plus, every male is described as unbelievably hot even if they aren’t a love interest. It’s just too much.

Mary is actually meant to be a rider like she killed it with defeating the Noirans!!