Status Updates From Desire's Curse (The Desire ...

I’m enjoying the story even if I still don’t like the writing style

The book is written in third person but includes internal dialogue for both the FMC and MMC. At times the shift is confusing as the POV changes mid paragraph and yet is still both first and third person. It pulls you from the story.

Otherwise the stalking has begun and there is some anticipation in wondering when Derick will act again.

First few pages there are a lot of problems with the language around Christian purity culture and “saving yourself”, along with envying the traditional marriage and kids path 😑 There’s also implication that a good girl doesn’t do online dating - it’s a little weird.

The writing is kinda meh but I’m reading for the vibes.