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Madeleine
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the premise was interesting, the writing is quite cringy, and a little annoying.
— Jan 31, 2026 05:23AM
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Kayla
is 16% done
I fear I don't like this 😬 my biggest grievance so far is that she is summarizing dialogue. Like midway through a scene, she stops writing out dialogue between the characters and there is just a paragraph of summary of the interaction.
On the other hand, the dialogue that does exist is with very stiff or very cringey.
— Jan 28, 2026 06:13PM
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On the other hand, the dialogue that does exist is with very stiff or very cringey.


















