Status Updates From Comedic Timing

not done for the night but need to add my thoughts. bad case of tell not show. apparently this character is cool and funny but i wouldn’t know. there is some growth and she does acknowledge her shitty behavior but it all feels so juvenile. interesting reverse conversation about not feeling trapped by labels

not sure how to feel. reads like an average love story (with the grit g to know bits) but not much romance. can’t tell if that’s honest or not observed, especially with how surface level the characters are. their conversations read very platonic. is that romance? camaraderie + attraction?

3.5/5 ⭐️