Status Updates From The Last Ember

Ah, so the union didn’t even want the egg, they were just made to want it

I realize a lot of my review notes up until now have been kind of preachy… then again i don’t think authors read these? If they can I’m sorry I’m just adding my two cents and having fun. Also I take back my earlier comment about characters acting their ages, this is how it felt to be 13

Cal you dipshit

Interesting how Dusty’s conflicted here. We’re just supposed to assume that the thieves’ union are the “good guys” because they said they don’t steal from the poor snd they don’t murder with guns. But there’s only so much robin hooding you can do, eventually you need to make a larger statement

I am tired of the gaseous sow
And other things from this book that sound like total chaos out of context

Not a great fan of the interludes, but it’s funny how they clarify the antagonist is NOT the spunky orphan’s father, just so we all know we’re not getting that tropey