Status Updates From Eternal Echoes

This story is good and interesting, imo, but there are so many editing mistakes, formatting issues, and continuity errors that are pulling me out of the story on almost every page. I try not to dock stars or whatever from indie authors for minor complaints like that too much, but I may just need to put this down...at least for now.

I want to DNF this so bad but I’m powering through the mess

This fake dating trope came out of nowhere

Well this is moving fast as hell and could’ve used a proof reader, but it isn’t terrible per se

The love I feel for these characters is something else.

He is down bad for her, i love it so much

I’m loving this so far omg, i’m so invested! the mix of fantasy and modern vibes is written so eloquently