Status Updates From Arcane Entanglement (The Ma...

нет ну как обидно то :/ все, мы ушли от магии и детектива к хорни сексу, а как бы тут хорошо смотрелся слоуберн!!!

история в целом увлекательная, но зачем эта инста-лав?? я бы с инста-сексуальным притяжением еще смирилась, но гг спустя день встречи уже о «жили долго и счастливо» грезит :/

Holy insta-love Batman.

This author overuses “their expression softened” and its variants waaaay too much and it’s driving me crazy

Just because your characters are acknowledging how fast they’re moving does not mean it makes it any more believable and less annoying. You met a day ago! You’re not falling in love! Shut up!

You’re telling me they are already exchanging “I love yous”??? They met yesterday! Most of their time together has been spent questioning witnesses in Scotland Yard holding cells.

Not saying it’s the worst first date idea, but nothing to profess love over in a 24hr time period.

I'm still so in love with the world.

Re-read: I'm still loving this so much.