Status Updates From Daghel (Dark Orcs of Helfal...

this morning is definitely a morning where i am questioning some of my reading choices. that is a very... unique way to form a mental connection while flying a wyvern 0_0

Bad writing

This is steampunk automatronic meets orcs and tribal matriarchies. The wyvern/orc relationship is different than anything I’ve ever read and rather violent. I can see how the FMC is going to fit into the system, and even the main point of conflict for the story, but I kind of wish we’d had some introduction to her beyond how she became a courtesan.