Status Updates From The Last Breath Before Death

That just came out of nowhere. What relevance did that have to the plot? That felt like in Guy Ritchie’s The Gentlemen when they all of a sudden made the racist joke of “Ricense to Kill” in regards to the Asian villain

“…We went for lunch, the four of us. Quentin recommended a nice Chinese restaurant. I’ve never been too fond of that kind of food, but I actually enjoyed it.”
“Not keen on eating cats and dogs, eh?” Jimmy joked, biting a slice of toast.”
What the actual fuck? And this CONTINUES! THIS HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE PLOT

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That’s now the 4th person Jimmy has told that he breaks into houses to get info

Pop culture references

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Ok so that’s three people and possibly counting that he’s told that he’s broken the law

Why is this dude just outing himself to people about breaking into the Holbrooks’ home?

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Also, when are we going to get to Germany? There hasn’t really been much to the story so far

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“It wasn’t even about the rejection, but the sheer arrogance of these women. Some of them were also
pregnant or had quite literally just had a baby. A lot of them also used ridiculous filters to make
them look much better than they did in real life.”
Not getting good vibes from this, I can’t lie

“One thing he often found ironic — and which even pissed him off at times — was the
way women acted on dating apps: average-looking women with ridiculous standards, holding out
for some kind of hero with model good looks.”
…where tf did this come from? Also if I have to read about this dude and his dating apps anymore I’m gonna DNF this book

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Dialogue’s a little clunky

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