Status Updates From Unleashed (Bratva Kings)

This so confusing. Who the fuck is Polina? Anissa is or isn’t her? And the memory loss was before the wedding she ran out on ANDanother after? This is shittily written

Dear author who wrote this. I’m about ten pages in and the word “snaps” has been used roughly 8,482 times, Buy a fucking thesaurus.

So much of the dialogue is repetitive, "I'm your husband", "you belong to me", "she's mine", and "you must be obedient" and all she wants is to undress herself to take a bath. It's very insta-lusty especially from the MMCs perspective, he can't stop talking about how much he wants her but barely know her. What do authors have against chemistry and romantic development? The girl has no sense of self preservation.