Status Updates From The Artist and the Orc (Orc...

For fucks sake: nothing better to counteract a panic attack then leading her into a bdsm pleasure room… I am at a loss of words

Furthermore: the sand and bodily fluids mix - yuck 🤢

Something positive first: I’m really enjoying the language barrier and how both of them are learning their respective language.
What I don’t like: endless descriptions of her reading all the meanings out of the way he fucks her… like girl sure you’re caught in the moment but yeah clearly him painting you with his cum means he will forever protect you… sure

I know I’m only ranting but: why the heck is the sex over when he came… yes I know she just got off on his tongue but the author (as a woman herself) is hopefully aware of multiple orgasms. Like girl…The game doesn’t have to end when he crosses the finish line

„Daisy’s thoughts were spinning now, reeling between the dungeon the latrine the blood, the flowers the sketchbook the sun.“
Comma placement?

So she spent days in the sickroom, yet no mention of washing herself or brushing her hair (didn’t she say it was curly? Cause girl your hair would be MATTED after days without care) Also: is she wearing the same soiled clothes she has been wearing since he kidnapped her?

I like smut. I want an adult way of falling in love and sex is a part of it, therefore I choose books with smut. But make it make sense.
You wouldn’t bone someone who trapped you, keeps secrets from, is not really trying to learn your language, and so on. Plus we’re constantly told, that she kinda fears him. Why would you suck his fucking dick in a latrine?!!?!!???

- at 8% they were going at it for the first time… I love smut, but I also love consistency and a women having heard gruesome tales of orcs wouldn’t bone one a few hours after getting stuck in a cave with him

- I think Filaks background and the overall world building were quite interesting and somehow the only reason I am currently continuing this
- why the hell is everything written in rhetorical questions????
- the language barrier was intriguing at first, now that they’ve got plenty of translators around, why exactly are we having the same issues again and again?

Is it bad I wish this will turn out a why choose 😂