Status Updates From Threads of Fate (Fated in t...

This is really badly written. It feels like it could do with a loooot more editing. But it’s weirdly entertaining and I’m invested.

I love Luca

I understand this is the authors debut novel and, as such, is quite good so far. However, the proofreaders and/or editors should be diligent about tenses because they definitely fluctuate enough to be noticeable.
Fascinating story so far, though!