Status Updates From Everybody Sees the Ants

It's pretty good so far. I hate Nader though and i'm confused in whether Lucky's granddad is actually alive or not. I'm also worried about if he'll ever make it home alive (?)

SUMMARY: The main character of my book is Lucky. He visits his Grandfather in his dreams and tries to bring him back. He ends up in Arizona because he was being bullied. While he is there he ends up changing his life and becoming a brand new person. This story is like Lucky's diary to him and he writes in it every day

VISUALIZE: There was a scene in my book, that I could visualize perfectly. I could taste and hear it like I was there. They were at the public pool and Lucky was doing cannonballs with his friends. I could taste the hot dogs his Dad was grilling in the back. It felt like a movie and it was all so clear like it was a dream.