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I really want this book to get interesting. I’m still giving it a shot. I usually like to give a book 100 pages especially one that is almost 400 pages long.

I’m not sure if I am going to keep reading this one. The writing is a little immature and it isn’t really cohesive. A lot has happen in a short time and we have bounced from one thing to the next. I understand the author is maybe building it’s the way they are doing it it’s hard to connect to the character.

I'll not be finishing this. The first page read like a student-level first attempt. Hopefully, this author has many years ahead to improve on writing skills because the description sounded great.