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The most annoying thing about this book is the cringey childish nicknames. Why is your dad called grumpy every two seconds? And your parents call you tater tot? So fucking juvenile! I hate when authors force jokes and laughter on the readers. Why can’t some jokes be natural?

This book is awful. The writing is beyond juvenile. If you told me an 11 year old wrote it, I would believe you. The premise is semi interesting but completely ruined by the terrible writing.

no i’m done this is bad

this writing is god awful but it’s fast paced and the plot is fun