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Hook. It's back, Didn't expect in the slightest bit, that the plot twist would be this. But still, too much use of Hindi, well it disrupts the immersion, and makes the flow cringe.

The hook, still searching for that last hook, that Devasish gives his readers to hold on to, the hook was there for the first quarter of the book, but now it's gone, *poof. Same goes for his second book in Simone Singh Series, the hook was there for most of the book, but the first one is something of a cult-classic. I still remember the words reverberating in my ears, "What does Adam have that Eve does't". Uffff

What the heck is happening?