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Aricia
is 55% done
The ideas are not bad but the book looks like a maybe third draft without anyone proofreading it. Passages feel inserted at the wrong place in the timeline, whole paragraphs are almost identical, spelling issues, wrong names and pronouns and words missing.
— Jul 11, 2025 12:53AM
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