Status Updates From Demons of Desire (Half-Bree...

So far this is better than I expected and different than my usual reads. It is good storytelling, it is just a bit light on the smut for being a book about a succubus. I’m invested though and gonna see it out until the end.

The dialogue makes me want to yell. It all feels very stilted and flat, not at all entertaining. Also very tired of the FMC shame spiraling every five pages.

The FMC’s best friend is pretty dismissive.