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Jaylee
is on page 10 of 368
I *really* want this book to be good. I hope it gets better alsdfasf. Right now it's a mess of .... juvenile writing mistakes, like not anchoring your char in their own desires and instead having them "follow instincts" and do things "they don't know why" and "it just drew me to it" nooooo.
Opening with a dream sequence and changing POV 3x in the first 15 pages is a bold move too
— Apr 05, 2018 09:29AM
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Opening with a dream sequence and changing POV 3x in the first 15 pages is a bold move too
YupIReadIt
is on page 58 of 368
Baby, y in the hell are you using the rape trope?!?! I don't understand
— Apr 09, 2017 03:50AM
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YupIReadIt
is on page 51 of 368
Any book with a Kid Cudi reference is ok with me
— Apr 09, 2017 03:01AM
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Sumayyah
is on page 44 of 368
First impressions: IMAGERY, WOO! Eden is..lok, she's been learning about her "purpose" her entire life, so she's surprised..why? Khale..an unflattering word. Demon King is "file not found" and Prophet? Harsh treatment, dude. And what the hell does the cover have to do with the contents of the book?
— Oct 03, 2015 03:44PM
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