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Anita Nowak
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So far this is just ok. I feel like I've been thrown into the plot too fast... where is the world building? Who actually are the main characters and why should I care about them? The scene has not been set
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Anita Nowak
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So far this is just ok, I feel like I've been thrown into the plot too fast... where is the world building? Who actually are the characters and why should I care about them? The scene hasn't been set very well here
— 2 hours, 56 min ago
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