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Tiffany
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I just learned that the author embraces WORD VOMITING in her drafts.
I'm curious as to why the extra repetitive words, sentences and phrases were not edited out. IT'S THE MOST INFURIATING PART OF THIS AUTHOR'S WRITING.
FOR EXAMPLE
"One spark. One spark, and the candle would go up, and then the curtains, and then I would have a flame big enough to manipulate."
"we sank down. And down. And down. Until there noth"
— 4 hours, 48 min ago
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I'm curious as to why the extra repetitive words, sentences and phrases were not edited out. IT'S THE MOST INFURIATING PART OF THIS AUTHOR'S WRITING.
FOR EXAMPLE
"One spark. One spark, and the candle would go up, and then the curtains, and then I would have a flame big enough to manipulate."
"we sank down. And down. And down. Until there noth"
Tiffany
is on page 192 of 498
It's falling short of expectations. The "trials" in the underworld could have been better thought out. Right now it's honestly just making a sprint for the relic before wraiths come and get you.
The vampire nobles made it sound so dangerous but it's honestly not. As long as you run faster than the last person, you'll be safe.
— 5 hours, 31 min ago
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The vampire nobles made it sound so dangerous but it's honestly not. As long as you run faster than the last person, you'll be safe.
