Status Updates From Raindrops

Why are there text messages written with quotations like dialogue? It’s confusing. This book could use an editor.

What the hell so this flashback to being two years old. A two year old doesn’t have coherent thoughts and memories like this.

I’m cool with women being villainized in MM books but sections like this about totally random female characters who’ve done nothing wrong are disgusting.

“Sorry, but you’re obviously not doing it for me.” I point to my flaccid cock. “You need a bit more practice, then you can try again.” It’s mean and a lie, but I have no capacity to be nice. The blonde begs and pleas, it’s pathetic…”