Status Updates From The Murder Machine

This is some veteran womans pulp fiction writer, I guess this woman has her niche locked down cause I'm sat here wondering how this book got made

This is mid-tier 2015 watt pad or something, unnatural dialogue, clumsy use of dialogue to do all of the story telling, detective solving that makes whack leaps of logic and now a romance plotline worse than cheap YA

Enjoying the book ironically though, its so bad

It's wierd and a little unnatural how these people talk

I mean... it's Aiight so far