Status Updates From Her Big Bad Wolf

Nine chapters. Nine. And MCs haven't even met.

Are this kids bunny shifters? Because they're like Bugs Bunny. And every adult in the town is Elmer Fudge.

Seriously? THe kids have been roaming around town and nobody saw them? C'mon!

So, as a human, he couldn't even smell the kids, but the second he shifts he finds them? Did anbody even try that? They're supposed to have trackers searching for the kids, but those useless fools didn't shift? Literally nobody seems to actually care for these poor children.

OMG, this is so frustrating! He can set up satellite internet, multiple shell companies, but he can't set a freaking surveillance camera by himself? Even I can do that, and I'm technologically challenged!

I'm sorry, but... how stupid is he? He knows three kids are missing. He is missing eggs, hay and now finds a pizza box in the trash he didn't put in there. And he can't put two and two together? He's supposed to be super smart, but I don't buy it.

It's the second time the fact that Kelse pardoned Christine instead o fkilling her in the mating trials is mentioned. Guess how important this fact is for the story of three missing kids? If you said uttelry unimportant, you get a point. These kids so far have been lost for days and nobody seems particularly worried about them, BTW.

Why exactly is the lady's night important? other than to info-dump on the history of the "alpha" couple that is not important at all for this story.

Also, this is so pointless... four chapters of info-dumping that has absolutely no importance in the story (most of which is the author telling us they're shifters). And a whole lot of nothing happens.

So far, the fact they're shifters has been just mentioned, and now they're "civilized" and "don't shift much". It doesn't seem like the fact they're shifters plays any rol in this story. I hate that. Seems authors just want to tap into the paranormal audience without really making an effort.