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The book switched from 3rd person to 1st person, then back to 3rd person again. What???

She was the sort of dog who seemed to expand while she slept, sprawling and snoring

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army experts had said there was no removing the part, once in: he was stuck with his new heart for the rest of his life. For him, the metal and magic heart had saved his life and given him extra strength. That was excellent when he was serving his country. Not so excellent when he didn't have the money to afford his next meal, and yet his body burned energy at a faster rate than ever because of what his strength cost

You see, I've come to offer you a job. Please don't say no immediately. Think of the dog."



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Their relationship is so cute. Excited to see more about this mystery though.

So far, this is delightful. Wonder why it's sitting at only 3.67 stars. Does it get worse later?

2 stars.

Wait.... you kissed and had sex and suddenly he's your beloved? O_o

I always feel like when writers use words like ingratiating they're writing with a thesaurus next to them.

ok the "i love you"s have been said. like. what else is there to this book. lol. i mean, no, of course the ~plot~ is compelling enough to make me read another half....... suuuuuuure..............................