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KatieV
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When he stood the blood rushed from his head with a pounding force, and he painfully remembered the night before. He felt desiccated. His eyes ached.
Dude's hungover and the author is addicted to her thesaurus. Wouldn't 'his mouth was dry' sound more natural and hangoverish than, he felt 'dessicated'. The language seems a bit too wooden and overwrought. Or maybe I'm a grouch.
— Sep 23, 2015 07:52AM
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Dude's hungover and the author is addicted to her thesaurus. Wouldn't 'his mouth was dry' sound more natural and hangoverish than, he felt 'dessicated'. The language seems a bit too wooden and overwrought. Or maybe I'm a grouch.
Ang
is 47% done
First full length Sabrina Darby - it's an ARC. So far a lot of hate and anger in the heroine...hoping she deals with this soon...the hero is trying so hard poor guy.
— Sep 02, 2014 09:51AM
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