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Chris
is 38% done
every single character smirks. i counted the word “smirk” twelve times in a single chapter. very irritating
— Oct 29, 2026 04:38PM
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Dave Stone
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That opening chapter almost cost Drew Wells a big fat DNF.
Be so, so careful how you start a book. Opening with a dying teenager weeping in a hospital bed as he rages against the injustice of his congenital defect is just too harsh.
Isekai almost never need the last moments of the previous life. and even fewer books need children of cry as they die.
IF you can choke that down, it gets better
— Mar 29, 2026 02:38AM
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Be so, so careful how you start a book. Opening with a dying teenager weeping in a hospital bed as he rages against the injustice of his congenital defect is just too harsh.
Isekai almost never need the last moments of the previous life. and even fewer books need children of cry as they die.
IF you can choke that down, it gets better
