Status Updates From Sincerely East

What is your dumb ass doing is correct

Book 2 was much better. Still need competent proofreaders for grammatical errors but the cohesiveness of the story was much better. I’m ready to dive into book 3

This author needs competent readers. When Mel was shot from Rhythm’s POV, she left the hospital with her mom and Harmony. We switch to East’s POV and she’s at the hospital and he scoops her up. She still has blood on her which leads to my understanding that this is the same night. Very inconsistent. Also mixing pronouns. So far the book is at a 4 because it is suspenseful but it may work down to a 3/3.5