Status Updates From Heart-Struck

I'm so excited to get this done so I can move on to something else 😮‍💨 I bet there will be 3 forced unmeaningful plot twists before the end still

This feels more and more like it was written by a middle schooler. The plot tries so hard to be emotional and full of twists but they just fall flat and feel too forced.

There isn't enough depth in the plot or characters for me to get immersed in the story

Its a mess tbh.. XD If I have to read "secret mission" or "bald man" again I will lose my mind.

The scenes are a bit all over the place and I'm still not connecting with the story or characters, but I will see this to the end!!

Idk... The whole future thing seems to be a second thought, and it feels more to be in current time with all the pop-culture references. Only the robots everywhere make this even a bit "futuristic".

Also the writing seems a bit clumsy at times and I'd hope for some things to be a bit more clarified, like someone fainting in the shower and you just silently and nonchalantly carry them off??? Like who does that..

Not the I love you after knowing each other for a couple of weeks and seeing just once 😭

Not enjoying this too much at least yet, but giving it a chance.

I'm not sure how the plot is going to evolve, but probably this huge tech company that owns everything is secretly turning everyone homophobic or something?

Attention authors... if you're gonna have a book 50 years in the future... don't keep using current pop stars... if TSwift is touring 50 years in the future and Olive Garden is still a thing, I want off this timeline.