Status Updates From Isolation

They slip out of the back of the supermarket. Anna leads, Keith follows, overloaded with stolen shopping packed into those heavy duty ‘bag for life’ carrier bags they have at the tills. She thinks that’s really funny in the circumstances, but Keith doesn’t appreciate the joke. He steps out but she gestures for him to wait. ‘Too many of ’em.’

Well it was alright I guess, just nothing explained why all the people died or why the only 2 last people on Earth are Keith and Anna. Keith becoming an asshole was cool I guess, I always like it when a kind person becomes dark but this could've been way better

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I know I’m updating far too much but.....manic pixie dream girl too? ...it’s so bad it’s almost funny. This is why I read 90% female authors.

My guy. Everyone is dead and the first thing you do is go eat a bunch of cake and look at p0rn mags at the grocery store.

Is it bad that I want the MC to die? I think it would be more entertaining

Main character is very unlikeable (which I’m normally fine with) he just doesn’t seem to give a shit about anyone even his father. He’s an adult man but has the attitude of a angsty teenage boy.

Also not much description. Just “huh oh look that guy is also dead.” It’s not scary because the main character seems very meh about everything.