Status Updates From The Weight of One Pomegranate

This is beautifully written so far and I can feel emotions from each character

This is heavy

“When she reached out to wake her, her shoulder was cold. With no warning that this was her last day on Earth, Eleni was gone. Fiddling with the gold of her new wedding ring, the doctor at the ER told my parents that there was no way anyone could have known. Likely, Eleni never felt pain, never knew what was happening. She only went to sleep, and then she no longer existed.”

That's one way to start a story