Status Updates From Depths of Vanalf (Grimnir C...

About 13% in so far, and I’m definitely intrigued. There was a great little adrenaline-pumping scene early on that hooked me, and now the story is settling into character introductions and worldbuilding. It already feels like an epic fantasy, layered, intentional, and like it’s building toward something much bigger. Excited to see where it goes.

I had such high hopes for this. But so far it’s full of a bunch of characters I cannot discern between other than Jason Bourne.

Not to mention there’s no urgency, flat dialogue, and repetition of items that makes this nothing like what I was expecting.