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Sierra Nathans Lightner
is 60% done
Okay I just finished chapter 14 and I realized that this author uses a lot of sentences like “not this, but this…” and it feels like they are trying to be very poetic about their writing but it’s too much. In just the last 3-4 pages of this chapter, the author used the “not this, but this” bit 7 times and it’s making it difficult to focus on what’s actually happening.
— Oct 11, 2025 09:44PM
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