Status Updates From Corsair

Ah of course a woman must mention her period. The book continues with Elizabeth throwing her life away for a man and David of course being more clever than she is. Uugghh just end this thing.

More racism, more misogyny and the two interchangeable women are now jealous of each other.
This book sucks

Ah yes, saying a man got dominated by a woman. Such insult. Just toss some gendered slurs in there Cambias.

We have some antisemitism now AAaaand a transphobic slur.
Cambias is definitely a piece of shit. Everyone who 5 stars this book should be viewed with suspicion. Why the fuck did Tor publish it.

Cambias indeed thinks women are just nags as we have Anne pointing out about two naked 15 yo girls getting raped and our self insert male power fantasy doesn't care and she's brushed off.
To write a man that doesn't care about pedophilia and that's the fantasy.. yeah.. Cambias has no problem with it too.

Two naked GIRLS that were bought as sex slaves from a refugee trader. Fuck Cambias. This is the second time and no it isn't called out as bad. Author is writing his pedo fetishes here.

Ah yes Anee the Crazy Boat Lady is merely here to further the plot of a male. She also has some negative comments to say for Tifane because "wimmin amirite"

Ah to Cambias he thinks children can give consent "(sort of)" this is the type of stuff pedophiles put in their books as "well you see I did say sort of" No. fuck you Cambias.
Also we have a dead woman to further a man's plot. This author is fucking gross as shit.

Liz is now just an object to gaze at
Anne is "crazy boat lady"
Tifane is gonna be dumped by "our hero" Schwartz because he's a use them and lose them misogynist.

Liz fucks up and loses her job because women can't do shit right.
Meanwhile self insert is cheating on his girlfriend in the same club as her because that's totally cool to do. Women are just objects right?

Ah here it is. Tifane was supposed to be a "Japanese Sex Bot" and now David doesn't like her because she has herself together.
She of course wants to have his baby since women are baby factories after all.
Meanwhile Liz is wearing a sundress instead of a uniform because wimmin always have to be pretty.

So Liz was adding weapons to the SOTHIS, but got caight and of course is like "I messed everything up" women messing everything up.
Meanwhile Tifane redecorated David's place with her own money because of course. She's also been faithful to him because chaste woman. Meanwhile he's been fucking everyone everywhere.
The misogyny is deep in this book. most won't notice it unless they've been paying attention.

Cambias wants us to know that Yumiko is ultra thin because she "forgets to eat" making her a perfect Japanese woman. So you don't have to worry about her sitting down and "pigging" out and being gross by eating anything.

More stuff about how guns are good.
Women are listed with the other THINGS that David needs.
Halfdan is an alpha male because we need a man that's "worse" than David so Cambias can say "Well at least he's not as bad as Halfdan" when it doesn't matter. You've gone far beyond the line.
Cambias hates sex workers and Chinese people. Sex workers are always described as dirty and Chinese people as shifty and items cheap.

And here we have the whole guns and ammo circle jerk. You see it's super special rounds that are super expensive!

The FBI would totally have seized the laptop and trashed the place. That's what cops do

So we have yet another dude.
Liz is of course sleeping with Jack so she can tell us how good a lover he is and praise him.
Anne doesn't have a weapon despite being alone and now we have two dudes that show up to threaten her.
This writing is familiar to 1?84 which is NOT a good thing.

WOW!
"black hobo/wizard bard"
as well as
"I knew he was from Southeast Asia"
THe racism continues.
Really this lowers my opinion of Tor that they would publish this shit.
Worse that this author also does TTRPGs.

Ah our guy Jack Bonnet which is the antagonist to David Schwartz Black Noir Kuro Space Pirate, says that women who fall for the boring pickup lines are 'airheads'

*sighs* I thought TOR published GOOD books.

We've ditched Tifane to some guy and there's tons of racist writing of how things are broken and what not.
This is def Male Writer (tm)

aaand the old guy tries to sexually molest Anne. She thanks him twice.. The fact she wasn't on guard all this time shows how badly Cambias doesn't understand women.

Another woman. Is only there as a "good luck charm" for an old guy who basically claims all the money they find.
She's also only there to tell him not to break the law. Just like Liz. All of these main female characters are interchangeable. *yawn*

Ah now we have sex object Tiffane which is "kept in micro-bikinis" and treated like a pet.
We also have the FBI hates local police hates military hates FBI circle going around.

Now we have a small Japanese woman (because they are all small when written by white male writers) married to a Texan and he calls her sweetie which isn't gross at all. She doesn't do much.
We have more men that are all super famous and Liz is all "COOooool" when she meets them because remember she is a woman and they are men.
Author thinks the "Mideast" is a "dusty hellhole" so we have that level of racism going on

So now Elizabeth is going to her apartment and David has just let himself in because he feels entitled to HER place. Also he's with a "Korean girl". She doesn't have a name or much of a description, he of course was having sex with her. Every woman in this book is sexually available to David
Of course Elizabeth doesn't have ANY reaction to him because this is an incel fantasy and they hate for women to have agency

I forgot to mention that Elizabeth is only there as a sex toy for David. He tell her they are going to have sex, he doesn't say "maybe we can have sex:. She's also only there to be the annoying woman that will be 'put in her place' later in the book.

Ah yes David has a ship called "Scabby Whore" because prmiscuous women are gross and disease filled. Our female lead has no real agency and David is a man child that is a super hacker that impresses said female lead. Fucking gross.. who published this? Tor? I had a higher opinion of Tor