Status Updates From A Body Not Her Own

Interesting concept but right from the start the pacing is strange (time skips weirdly, writing doesn’t flow smoothly from 1 thing to the next) & the world is incredibly unclear (How does the magic work? Medieval, modern or somewhere inbetween? Are the sheep in this world carnivores? How does they know she’s the reincarnation of the goddess? Etc). Could be a promising start for a 1st book but it’s a DNF for me

staring at the wall because we just met the love interest and they already immediately slept together. girl, the tension, it's gone,

at no point am i able to guess where this is going

this feels fresh