Status Updates From A Forbidden Love

Holy hell. WHY IS NOTHING HAPPENING. D:

--"The tune still plays in my mind & I'd like to give it a name."
--"It has no name. None known to me," she said in a weak voice. "I heard it as a child."
--"Who sang it to you?"
--Ebony lashes sunk like wilted rose petals. "I can't say."
--"And why not?"
--"It is forbidden to speak of the dead."

'A fretful notion came to her, that she would be swallowed up by the manor's walls & imprisoned eternally for daring to enter the sacred confines, even if it wasn't by her own accord. [...] And if anyone were to find her here, uninvited, she'd be tossed directly into the jail. Was this not taking the chains from her feet & placing them on her wrists instead?'

Not sure what to expect with this one. My track record with New Breed Avons ain't that great. >___>