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Marlene
is 22% done
Although I’m enjoying the story so far, reminded of personal favourites like “1984” and especially “Brave new world” , the many mistakes are annoying.
Examples:
canvass (verb) instead of canvas (noun, heavy cloth).
‘Ash bellowing (scream) ’ instead of “billowing”.
‘... know who you’re ...’ should certainly be “who you are”.
‘... engineering feet’ instead of “feat”
Many more.
— Dec 08, 2017 09:09AM
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Examples:
canvass (verb) instead of canvas (noun, heavy cloth).
‘Ash bellowing (scream) ’ instead of “billowing”.
‘... know who you’re ...’ should certainly be “who you are”.
‘... engineering feet’ instead of “feat”
Many more.
Anne
is 50% done
This is a good story. I hope there will be additional installments.
— Aug 15, 2016 05:16AM
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