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I love the plot, but the book needs major editing. The first half of the book seems to have struggles deciding which point of view and tense to stick to and that's in addition to telling. The whole book continues with telling rather than showing to the point that the emotions feel fake.
— Feb 28, 2019 09:08PM
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