Status Updates From Broken People

How long did it take you to get here"
"How long to get here?"
I thoight for a brief moment and finished responding.
"A lifetime, Michelle, It took me a lifetime."

."...damned near everyone on this earth is the same height. They all see each other. ..They live unaware of anything they can't see. And they can't see beyond the person in front of them. Every now and then, a tall person is born. They, from their vantage point, are all seeing. They are all aware, and they see all there is to see.

It was as if the closer i came to the end, the clearer it became- the end was the only answer. Proof not only the end was near, but the reinforcment of the end being my only escape from the overwhelming pain....
No one cared enough to provide me with what i needed to end this pain. A simple hug. A kiss. Some form of expressed love...

God..
Grant me the serenity,
To accept the things i cannot change;
The courage to change the things I can;
And the wisdom to know the difference.
Amen

The number of spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors in this book make it frustrating to read. How is it rated so highly?? I would like it more with adequate editing.

Struggling to finish it. I hate this.

Struggling to finish it. I hate this.

Meh. The language is so bad. The dialogue is unrealistic. But the character traits are cool. Some of them, at least. A lot of them are either too exaggerated, or too stereotypical.

I'm not in love with it.

"The problem in my opinion was with the last portion of the dream. Being successful and raising a family. I would prefer successful raising a family."

Trying to continue through the tears, and blubbering like a baby...
"For the first time, I felt as if I could touch my body. In spirit, I closed my eyes and prayed. And an odd warmth began to fill me."