Status Updates From Private Relations (The Lock...

80% in. Put off by something that is happening. Outside of my personal comfort zone. May finish

I'm having a hard time staying focused because the story drifts all over the place. Just when I'm interested in learning more about Jesse or Vanessa, I get the back story on Bianca or get details on random kids or things about the weather. Too many times I've asked myself, "What did THAT have to do with anything?" There's an interesting story there but it's weighed down by unnecessary details. I hope that stops.

I feel bad for what happened to Jesse. Too many adults take advantage in situations like those. And too many of us have similar stories like that. Uhm uhm uhm . . . what a shame.

Really, Eric? You don't get what you want so you start revealing secrets? Bastard!