Status Updates From The Equation of Us: A Spicy...

It's giving AI..I think it might be

I'm enjoying it so far but I'm not sure if there's something I've missed. There seems to be a measurable timeline, with mentions of 'last night' or 'yesterday' but then after their first meeting, the FMC is having a girls night and her friend is talking about going on a first date. The next day or day after, the FMC mentions that her friend has been seeing this guy for a few weeks, but we're still in the first week..

a lot of repetition of things that have already been discussed.

girl is better than me I’d leave him on read

right so is sadie not also kinda aware or am i imagining that

this is not a good idea

frontal lobe developing bc im starting another hockey series and idc

however long ago bro literally mentioned losing his best friend, only for it all to be reiterated 😭😭😭😭 convinced not a single person read this book through from start to end before publishing

Am taking it upon myself to be miss Calloway’s editor

at the end of previous chapter mmc and fmc agree to seeing each other again on Thursday 9pm. literally the next day mmc texts fmc about when he can see her again???? and she says ‘tmr 9pm’!???

girl what

I’m crying dawg within the same chapter the fmc has switched between wearing 1. sports bra 2. bralette 3. camisole????

this screams ai generated omfg…