Status Updates From Undermined (Daniel Owen Wel...

I'm getting whiplash from how Daniel keeps switching between Maldwyn and Kent; they were apparently on a first name basis a few chapters in, now he is Kent again, except when he is Maldwyn? Make up your mind.

Honestly, they jumped into bed fast. This is an 8.5 book series, could the author not have given us some slow burn before the hook up. Plus Daniel injured and supposed to be resting his leg.

I do so loathe when a story/book ends before the 95% mark. Boo, excess padding!

That sudden villain breakdown reminds me so much of Criminal Minds. It works better on television than in writing, but I got a good laugh regardless. (Though I don't think that's the intended reaction.)

Okay, that's just bloody excessive.