Status Updates From Two Steps Back

This is quite sexy and they haven't even done anything yet.

Wow, that's impressive. You pack the kid up and ship him off when he's 16 because he's gay and suddenly all the woes of the world are his fault and everything is running on his agenda. That's one spechul family that Dallin has.

I'm enjoying the way this one is progressing. It's a little on the different side for me. My only hope is that we'll get more of William's perspective on things as the story moves along.

unggg sedih juga.... sesek2 enak nih baca nya. keren

buhahahah mutan ...buhahaha langsung cengegesan baca nya...lol

buahahaha sadist boooo.... so far so good...

“His father was trembling as he took a step forward. “Just because you turn your back on God, don’t think that means the rest of the world is full of sin.” “And just because you’re holier than thou in private and in public, don’t assume everyone is the same. Lots of people sing hymns and then go home and do their neighbor’s little girl.” Best religious confrontation between parents and gay son ever. Lmao!

“Gracebea, his first niece and the only one whose name he actually knew. If there were a stupider name for a girl, Dallin couldn’t come up with it off the top of his head. Urinata, maybe.” Lmao Excerpt From: Gala, Lyn. “Two Steps Back.” Loose Id

“Gracebea, his first niece and the only one whose name he actually knew. If there were a stupider name for a girl, Dallin couldn’t come up with it off the top of his head. Urinata, maybe.” Lmao Excerpt From: Gala, Lyn. “Two Steps Back.” Loose Id

“Wait, this is a company check.”
“Yes.”
“Your company is paying me?”
“Of course,” William said in that same maddening tone. The sky was blue, Phoenix was hot in summer, and Dallin was getting paid out of a corporate account for spreading his legs and letting William spank him. Of course. LOL I love Dallin!!!

So far so good :)

Not impressed so far.

Weird so far...

I want Ben to get his own romance story! In the end, this story tipped down to the whatcha-doin-here side a bit, losing its boom-boom-boom-like-a-big-bass-drum awesome, but still an enjoyable read. 3.5 stars rounded up. Gala is a reliable thought-spinning read!

All the previous sexual scenes have been explosively satisfying, but this violet wand scene has me completely disconnected, simply skim reading... trying to catch up emotionally with Dallin and William.... How the heck did they get here? Shouldn't there be something... else?

Yanno what's bizarre? In their whole blow-out fight, Dallin never once mentioned that the reason he was trying to "shut out" William from his personal troubles was because he was William's whore, not a boyfriend! He mentioned it enough to himself over the course of the story. That was a glaring emotionally issue that was never address. Other that the paltry conversation with Ben, which just whitewashed the issue.

Dallin's reaction to William's call to his brother seems way overreaction. He's dumping all his anger on William, in response to his feelings connected to knowing for sure his parents will never change/mature.

I bet William will post an ad in a personals column.... Also, this story isn't going where I wanted it to go, but it's still interesting, compelling. Dallin is a strong man. William is a rich, socially-privileged man.

But, as a lonely reader, I am here, reading his past pain and marveling at how strong and clear-minded, how balanced and psychologically "with it" he is, and he's done it all by himself, lived and learned through his trauma. My god, he's amazing.

Omg! The paragraph about when Dallin cried! Holy ducky fuck! It would only be more powerful if he said it out loud, if someone who cared heard his internal angst. That would rip me up hard.